Tōtara Weekly Reflection

Term:1               Week:9

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)my art work picture will be below.

Here is my Mihi Art … (Picture)

What is my personal goal for next week?to complete work on time/early.

This fortnights Tōtara goal is responding appropriately and I achieved/showed this by…because i earnt 5 or 6 tokens for doing that goal.

Between now and the end of term what do I need to do on my passion project?assemble our hoop .

week 8

Tōtara Weekly Reflection

Term:               Week:

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)finishing my work on Tuesday which was reading hopscotch

Something I need to improve on is… (explain)writing because i wont finish in time or early.

My last week’s personal goal last week was… time management

I achieved this or did not achieved this it by...i was on time or early to every group this week

What is my personal goal for next week?sit where i wont get discrated

This fortnights Tōtara goal is responding appropriately and I achieved/showed this by...i think i did good because i got 3 tokens.

week 7

Tōtara Weekly Reflection

Term: 1              Week:7

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)

passion project because we done a lot work

‘Science in Van’ were at school and I learnt...
pulling a board will make stuff go down in the thing below

Our inquiry is about geology and our world… (what’s some new I have learned)
earth layers

What is my personal goal for next week?

to stick on time management

This fortnights Tōtara goal was Time Management and I achieved/showed this by...
i was do stuff i was told

week 6

Week 6 - Reflection

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)
completing my work on time so i don't go to lunchtime

Something that has challenged me this week is… (explain why)
trying new things

A school value that I have worked hard at achieving this week is… (add evidence and a brief explanation)
connect because i have been talking to other people.

A school value that I need to work on is… (explain why)
be brave because i stick with the same stuff.

This fortnights Tōtara goal was Time Management and I achieved/showed this by...
because i was on time for group .

camp writing

CAMP DESCRIPTION

Achievement Objectives:

Purposes and audiences

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• INDICATORS:
• –  constructs texts that show a growing awareness of purpose and audience through careful choice of content, language, and text form;
• –  conveys and sustains personal voice where appropriate.

Ideas

Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.

INDICATORS:

• –  forms and expresses ideas and information with increased clarity, drawing on a range of sources;
• –  adds or changes details and comments to support ideas, showing some selectivity in the process;
• –  ideas suggest awareness of a range of dimensions or viewpoints.

Language features

Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.

• INDICATORS:
• –  uses oral, written, and visual language features to create meaning and effect and engage interest;
• –  uses a range of vocabulary to communicate meaning;
• –  demonstrates good understanding of all basic spelling patterns and sounds in written English;
• –  uses an increasing range of strategies to self-monitor and self-correct spelling;
• –  writes legibly, fluently, and with ease when creating texts;
• –  uses a range of text conventions, including most grammatical conventions, appropriately and with increasing accuracy.

Structure

• Show a developing understanding of text structures.
• INDICATORS:
• –  understands that the order and organisation of words, sentences, paragraphs, and images contribute to and affect text meaning;
• –  identifies a range of text forms and recognises some of their characteristics and conventions.
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Motivation:

• Write a description about one event/experience from camp.

Key outcomes:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths - simple/compound/complex
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

My draft and editing:

Published writing:

Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to be lost in the forest building a fort.
Well this is what i was experiencing. We where on a walk got lost . the 3 boys and the 5 girls.

the boys gathered wood and materials to build shelters there 2 trees it looks perfect. At the end it look like the pyramids in Egypt . it was sick we had water proofing and it was earthquake proof.

accomplished it was done now time to install the Ps4 and flat screen TV our sale pitch was $10 bucks /metro card TV ,ps4 it has it all. done sold to a hiker the card is ours time to ditch.

Going out there was so fun i would do it so much more . one of my favourite experience ever.

My reflection and next step: to make sure paragraphs make sense and reread

Tōtara Weekly Reflection Term: 1              Week:2

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)

getting to know people

What challenged me over last two weeks?

getting discrated by some people

How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future?

moving away and not work with those people

What is my personal goal for next week?

to get all my work done correctly

This fortnights Tōtara goal was greetings and I achieved/showed this by...

good because i have been greting my friends properly

week 4

Weekly Reflection

Term:1 Week:4

Something I am proud of from camp … doing the giant swing because i was nervous and i slipped out the seat.

tyler watched me.

A highlight from camp for me was … coasterring because we went down the mud hill.

What challenged me over last two weeks?activites because some washed.

How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future?try go round and different ways.

This fortnights Tōtara goal was active listening and I achieved/showed this by…i was listning my inscrutors at camp.

Next week I would like to achieve in class is… finish my work early.